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Marnasa WIP by *nao-neko:iconnao-neko:

Categories Fan Art > Digital Art > Drawings > Books/Novels

©2009-2010 *nao-neko
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Heres a WIP! Let me know what you think so far <3 I would love to be critiqued. :)

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~PrissyKissy Apr 20, 2009, 11:23:49 PM
Oh....wow! It's beautiful! And for this to just be a wip.....eeeee! It's gonna be even MOre awesome when it's finished! I looove his shirt for some reason....you did a great job showing the gathers and folds in the fabric. I also really like her hair...it's gonna be sooo gorgeous with the shading in! The only thing that I might modify a bit is his ear....it might be a bit too wide and round (I never paid attention to them before...that's just something that kinda hit me). This is sooooo wonderful! Faboo job!

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*WishIWould Apr 20, 2009, 11:26:26 PM
This is beautiful!!! I've told you before how much I love the line art. <3 one recommendation, if you're willing to make changes, is to not be afraid to let the rest of his hair be as long as the bangs!it's much hotter that way <_< but more importantly , more marfy<3

Also, I'm not sure how but in your shading (or does something need to change now?) To make his shoulder larger/stronger.

I love the colors, the composition, especially their hands and expressions!

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“I always thought my favorite thing in the whole world was reading a good book, but it turns out my favorite thing in the world is writing a book.” - Stephenie Meyer
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~Lynxie-Chan Apr 21, 2009, 8:07:12 PM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Dies* <333

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...As a general rule, I probably ate the text that went here... Sorry.
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~dollyrose09 Apr 21, 2009, 8:26:35 PM
Awww Awesome! This looks great! I love how Manasa looks especially her hair. Their hands are amazing! I would say some critiques but Lauren and Lori pretty much summed it up. I can't wait to see this finished! :hug:

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I dream of a better tomorrow......where chickens can cross roads and not have their motives questioned. :paranoid:

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*CallistoHime Apr 22, 2009, 9:11:53 AM
*______________________* ::Melts into Marnasa goo::

GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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~*Chrissy*~

I have Marth's Angst hoodie for sale on eBay if anyone wants it. He don't need it no moar >.> Geehee :heart:
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*nao-neko Apr 22, 2009, 4:27:54 PM
Oh no! 8O I have melted Chrissy! (Is this a good thing I wonder? how do I unmelt someone...)

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Uwahue!! :dance:
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*CallistoHime Apr 22, 2009, 6:39:31 PM
Ees a good thing :love: TEEHEE!

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~*Chrissy*~

I have Marth's Angst hoodie for sale on eBay if anyone wants it. He don't need it no moar >.> Geehee :heart:
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*nao-neko Apr 22, 2009, 8:15:59 PM
Thanks! :icongwomp:

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Uwahue!! :dance:
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~dollyrose09 Apr 26, 2009, 2:23:07 PM
Welcome! =)

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I dream of a better tomorrow......where chickens can cross roads and not have their motives questioned. :paranoid:

Nobody move!.........Dropped me brain ~ Jack Sparrow

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